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My first draft of this document was completely different from this final draft. In my first draft all I did was write about Supreme. It was basically another article made by VICE or The New York Times. There was nothing different about it. It wasn't until Dr. P critiqued my work and told me that I needed to make my story personal. And so I did, it was a long process to find what made Supreme personal to me, but I found it and it branched out to my final draft.
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